I think everything typed was very reasonable. However, think about this, what if you composed a catchier title? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your blog, however what if you added something that makes people want more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little vanilla. You might look at Yahoo's front page and note how they create post headlines to grab people interested. You might add a related video or a picture or two to get readers interested about everything've written. In my opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier.