I think that what you composed made a bunch of sense. But, think on this, suppose you wrote a catchier title? I am not saying your content isn't solid, but what if you added a headline to possibly grab a person's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda boring. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create news headlines to get viewers to click. You might add a related video or a pic or two to grab people excited about everything've written. Just my opinion, it would bring your blog a little bit more interesting.
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